tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4976672479621832457.post4113983236666655893..comments2024-03-12T07:33:55.496+00:00Comments on Fiona Pearse: Beverly, Draft 3Fiona Pearsehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00322089620930374315noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4976672479621832457.post-1471761059870427882014-11-07T10:53:21.298+00:002014-11-07T10:53:21.298+00:00Thanks for your comment, Christine. I know what yo...Thanks for your comment, Christine. I know what you mean about linking the jealously to the ex-boyfriend. You must have been multitasking when you pasted in the quote ;)Fiona Pearsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00322089620930374315noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4976672479621832457.post-9948905332695942712014-10-05T18:19:08.606+01:002014-10-05T18:19:08.606+01:00The sentence, 'Upon speaking to others I have ...The sentence, 'Upon speaking to others I have found that it is a very common theme amongst so many. The feeling that there has to be more … We feed our minds and bodies with all the right nourishment but that feeling of hunger in the pit of our stomach just won’t go away.' could be better expressed, I think. It's a little clumsy, though the information is good.<br />perhaps there would be a way to link those thoughts in with the fact she was never jealous....until......Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11976538607575202318noreply@blogger.com